Elaine, Vertigo comics

[Elaine]

Basic Information

Player Nickname: 

That girl that plays Elaine and Halo.

Profile URL: 

roleplay.chat/profile.php?user=Elaine

* The character name in RPC might be switched to just “Elaine” if it ever becomes available.

Do you want other role players to give you feed back? 

Yes.

Which DCU Earth are you applying to? 

She’s a Vertigo Comics character but in her particular case she is a singularity, she's unique, so, everywhere.

Character Origin: 

Vertigo comics.


Name:

Elaine.

Her last name is technically Demiurgos because her biological dad is Michael. Her biological mom's name was Jude. The Bellocs were illegal adoptive parents to a stolen child. She loves her adoptive mom though.

Alias:

Elaine.

Race:

She's a Goddess, was part Archangel, part human.

Age:

She has the looks of a young woman in her late teens/early 20's. However she has always behaved like an adult in a girl's body. Her age is hard to figure out due to time compression/dilation between different creations/multiverses, she's eons old at this point.

Birthday:

She was born in November, 1988, unless it was in less than the usual 9 months but I am personally going with November 17th.

Alignment:

Neutral good with a big prime-directive-like thing of not interfering but doing it anyway occasionally.

Height:

5' 7"

Weight:

120 lbs

Hair:

Shiny jet black, very faded purple hint.

Eyes:

Green/blue, blue/green.

Physique: 

She’s beyond unique and special. Small, delicate and slim frame. Angelic, striking and youthful looks. She is a flawless diamond with a soul so bright that it can be seen from anywhere, literally, by beings that can appreciate that kind of blinding shimmering beauty. She looks more girlish than womanish. Her wings are no longer angelic sand they appear to be made of pure energy and light, it is pretty terrifying and beautiful at the same time. She also chooses to appear the way she likes, either as an immense representation of herself, intangible, or normal with or without wings. She likes to wear short dresses or schoolgirl outfits for the most part.

Training: 

Her adventures with Lucifer, Mona and many others. Some abilities are innate, some come with the job and others she learned by herself as it should be for a good Goddess.

Equipment:

Nothing and everything at the same time. She can whip out, or create, whatever she or others needs, like a flying horse for Mazikeen. Whatever she creates is permanent unless she doesn't want to.


Powers / Abilities

~ She is is omnipotent and omniscient, which she finds very distracting and somewhat weird. She also currently holds the dunamis demiurgos within her, the infinite power of god, which she had to absorb from her father Michael when he died or otherwise everything would have been destroyed instantly by its release and everything means everything.


Weaknesses

~ Her friends and family.

~ Dialogue.

~ Herself.


Character Time Line

In the canon story everything happens between 2000 and 2001, however since room canon is at 2015 it had to be adapted. Because most people do not know anything about the character, I chose a longer approach than the usual bullet-point format. Also, good luck trying to figure out dates when time compression/dilation happens all the time!

2000-2017:
~ Elaine's best friend forever, Mona, is murdered by her school director and everything starts from this point.

~ She met her uncle Lucifer. She’s saved by him after he is warned by the Basanos, the tarot cards created by Meleos, about keeping Elaine alive because there might be a future where she might be important for the grand scheme.

~ She learns of her real origins, meets Michael in a pocked dimension. Lucifer saves both of them. Michael's infinite demiurge power is triggered in the void, heals Michael, Lucifer's creation is born, Michael returns to the Silver City.

~ Elaine meets Mazikeen. Elaine finds out that she can astral travel. She finds herself in numerous places and dangers while testing her abilities, including Hell and discovers that she is an angel like her dad. She’s saved by and befriends Duma, the Angel of Silence.

~ Met the angel Meleos and learnt about Lucifer's near-death by the Basanos. Met Death of the Endless and then saved Lucifer after transferring her vital energy to him. Elaine dies because of this and goes with Mona to the Mansions/Halls of Silence.

~ Yahweh leaves creation. Elaine and Mona's souls are rescued in the Mansions/Halls of Silence by Lucifer, which are destroyed by him in the process as they were never designed to support his presence.

 ~ Mona and Elaine decide that they prefer to be spirit guardians, like Duma is of silence. Elaine says that she wants everything. Mona wants hedgehogs. Lucifer makes them both Goddesses of what they wanted in his creation.

~ Elaine and company expel every immortal from Lucifer's creation by his request, just to keep the body count low since he'd do whatever was quicker instead. They all return to their respective universe or are removes of their immortality by Elaine.

~ The gates of passage become unstable. Fenris attacks Yggdrasil. Fenris tricks Elaine and Lucifer ends up killing Michael.

~ Elaine is forced to absorb the dunamis demiurgos in order to save everything that exists. Elaine creates her own creation by accident and there are three now, Yahweh's (which includes all of DC), Lucifer's and now Elaine's. She is the new demiurge.

~ She gets Yahweh's power and control over his creation, gets Lilith re-killed. Then she saves everyone by merging the three creation into one, her own, becomming THE Goddess with everything signed with her name. Hurray!!!

Audition post

Elaine's personality is nice, extroverted with those that she knows already, good aligned, mature (more than her father, uncle and destiny at least), somewhat playful especially around Mona...

“So…” she started, unsure as to what to say to her father. Her expression had went from the initial surprise of him actually seeking her out on his own will, a soft smile, to a slightly awkward silence in which she looked at him at times while the two walked together, alone and barefoot across the grassy fields, not too far away from her poor old uncle’s bar. She was wearing a simple white dress and, like her father, her wings were visible at the moment. She chewed on the corner of her lower lip until Michael managed to say something, likely out of pure stubbornness.

“I know about what my brother gifted upon you, how do you feel as a Goddess, Elaine?” he asked, quite a tall figure when compared with his daughter but Elaine couldn’t help but feel a sense of protection with him nearby, just like she did with other members of her family and friends, like Lucifer and Mazikeen.

“Really well.” she said simply, it always took her some time to open up to others but, noticing that her answer was cut a bit short she forced a slight smile up at her father and continued.
“I mean, I wouldn’t have done anything differently, are you angry at Lucifer because of that?” she asked with a hint of curiosity.

“No, I’m not.” he replied, actually realizing the same thing as Elaine, his reply being a bit too abrupt. Like father, like daughter. More silence followed for almost a minute in which Elaine was pretty sure about Michael not wanting to speak anymore. However she, once again, proved to be more mature.
“Do you want to know why not hedgehogs?” she asked the first thing that came to my mind, just to keep the conversation open and flowing.
“Why not hedgehogs?” he replied as he looked at her with mild curiosity, he seemed to genuinely not understand it.

Elaine actually giggled at his question, surprised that it had worked. She had a very beautiful laugh and a smile. “Because Mona wanted them, we’re now officially the sisters of mercy.” she replied, seemingly more at ease with him.
There was the hint of a smile in Michael and the two kept walking and talking for a while.
“Let’s make this a habit?” Elaine offered after Michael told her that he should go and place his attention elsewhere. Michael agreed and with a flash of his wings he was off into unreachable distance. Elaine did the same and soon enough she was back at her uncle’s bar, she had a sweet smile now, not just for her uncle, but also for her father.

[Deleted]

Mar 12, 2015 15:37:30 GMT -5 Elaine said:

* I like to imagine Elaine just like the picture exposed at the top of my profiles, but if you prefer faceclaims then you're free to choose between these two.
Face Claim's Name: Mellisa Clarke.
*She models topless, be careful if you search her on Google.

Face Claim's Name: Megan Fox.


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Age: (Based on how you play them)
Young, unknown, her age isn’t very relevant due to the nature of the character.

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Eyes:
Blue=~Green.

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Training: (Martial Arts; Jujitsu, Karate, Military Basic Training, Sewing, Cooking, Hunting, etc.)
Her adventures with Lucifer, Mona and others. Her goddess form was given to her by Lucifer.

Equipment: (Rocket Launcher, Metal Plated Cape, Night vision Goggles, Frying Pan, Cell phone.)
Nothing.

Powers / Abilities
Goddess level (She’s above pagan gods like Zeus, Ares, etcetera).
Half-angel level. (Specifically, she’s a half-archangel. She’s below Michael and Lucifer and she’s about the same as other angels).
She can use creation powers if she has the material for it, similarly to what Lucifer does by shaping things, but without demiurgic power she cannot create a multiverse with a big bang.
She is able to heal and she can make herself more powerful than most mages, etc.

Weaknesses
Mona (I’m currently seeking another player to play Mona, please PM me if you’re interested).
The fact that she has yet to fulfill her destiny.

Character Time Line
Elaine is best friends forever with Mona but she's assassinated.
Met her old uncle Lucifer. She’s saved by him.
Learns of her reals origins, meets Michael.
Met Mazikeen. Elaine finds herself in numerous places and dangers while testing her abilities. She’s saved by and befriends Duma, the angel of silence.
Elaine erases her mother’s memories to bring her peace and happiness.
Met the angel Meleos and learnt about Lucifer.
Met Death after helping Lucifer resurrect. Elaine dies because of that and goes with Mona.
Elaine and Mona are saved by Lucifer in the Halls of Silence.
Mona becomes the guardian of hedgehogs and Elaine the guardian of everything else. Elaine becomes a Goddess.
Met Raguel, the angel of vengeance, basically another uncle for Elaine. Met Yahweh, her grandfather.

Additional notes by me (Elaine).
Like I wrote in my profile, I don't want to enjoy the original story again, if I wanted that then I would enjoy the comics or a wiki. Instead, I would like to enjoy everything differently and figure out how to get her to fulfill her destiny.
For this room I have kept parts of the original story intact, so that my Elaine is correctly integrated with Slade’s Lucifer, and I have also left some parts of the story vague because I didn’t like them much in the Vertigo Comics.
The long term story arc for Elaine is to become the new Goddess of creation in a different way that the one shown in the Vertigo Comics. However once she reaches that point, PvP roleplays are banned entirely with her.
PvP roleplays with Elaine before that are only discouraged, not just because of her but also because her family and friends are Lucifer, Mazikeen, Yahweh, Michael, Raguel, Duma…
Constantine is banned from being anywhere close to Elaine under the penalty of death by Lucifer.
I enjoy romances in general, however I honestly don’t know any canon character in the Vertigo Comics, or DC, that could be foolish brave enough to even try anything with Elaine, for the same reason that I discourage PvP with her. Suggestions are welcome but don’t personally hate me if I dislike them all please.

Audition post
Elaine's personality is nice, extroverted with those that she knows already, good aligned, mature (more than her father, uncle and destiny at least), somewhat playful especially around Mona...

“So…” she started, unsure as to what to say to her father. Her expression had went from the initial surprise of him actually seeking her out on his own will, a soft smile, to a slightly awkward silence in which she looked at him at times while the two walked together, alone and barefoot across the grassy fields, not too far away from her poor old uncle’s bar. She was wearing a simple white dress and, like her father, her wings were visible at the moment. She chewed on the corner of her lower lip until Michael managed to say something, likely out of pure stubbornness.

“I know about what my brother gifted upon you, how do you feel as a Goddess, Elaine?” he asked, quite a tall figure when compared with his daughter but Elaine couldn’t help but feel a sense of protection with him nearby, just like she did with other members of her family and friends, like Lucifer, Mazikeen or Raguel for example.

“Really well.” she said simply, it always took her some time to open up to others but, noticing that her answer was cut a bit short she forced a slight smile up at her father and continued.
“I mean, I wouldn’t have done anything differently, are you angry at Lucifer because of that?” she asked with a hint of curiosity.

“No, I’m not.” he replied, actually realizing the same thing as Elaine, his reply being a bit too abrupt. Like father, like daughter. More silence followed for almost a minute in which Elaine was pretty sure about Michael not wanting to speak anymore. However she, once again, proved to be more mature.
“Do you want to know why not hedgehogs?” she asked the first thing that came to my mind, just to keep the conversation open and flowing.
“Why not hedgehogs?” he replied as he looked at her with mild curiosity, he seemed to genuinely not understand it.

Elaine actually giggled at his question, surprised that it had worked. She had a very beautiful laugh and a smile. “Because Mona wanted them, we’re now officially the sisters of mercy.” she replied, seemingly more at ease with him.
There was the hint of a smile in Michael and the two kept walking and talking for a while.
“Let’s make this a habit?” Elaine offered after Michael told her that he should go and place his attention elsewhere. Michael agreed and with a flash of his wings he was off into unreachable distance. Elaine did the same and soon enough she was back at her uncle’s bar, she had a sweet smile now, not just for her uncle, but also for her father.







 Well well! Hello! I seen you in chat earlier today and checked your profile. I was curious if you were apart of the Justice League, too. I'm fairly new to the community but I've had past forum RP experience as well as chat experience and just wanna suggest a few things from my perspective. You can disregard everything if you wish, it won't hurt my feelings.


1. The parentheses in the profiles -  they're aesthetically distracting. It would sure clear up your profile information to erase the guildelines in parentheses.


2. Melissa Clarke > Megan Fox. 'Nuff said. I would personally enjoy seeing Melissa Clarke as your FC.


3. It says your character is young... and since she is potentially a celestial creature numbers may not satisfy the descriptive universe. A suggestion would be "Immortal" or "Ageless".. then leave using words such as "Young" to describe her physique and appearance.


4. The eyes... is the Heterochromic? Do they interchange from blue to green, or is half of her iris blue and the other half green ( which is also a form of heterochromia)? I got a little confused. Regardless, each color is beautiful for the eyes!


5. Her training - She was given her angelic abilities by Lucifer? Was this when he was still in heaven or after he was casted down from heaven to be the ultimate ruler of hell? Would this make her a fallen angel? or something of that aspect - that is, if she was given abilties after Lucifer was cast from heaven/left heaven. These questions are off of personal intrigue and speculation. I'm not familiar with Vertigo Comic and Elaine's storyline. Also, not only those questions but what training did she recieve from her adventures with Lucifer? Did she learn hand to hand combat? Marksmanship? Spellcasting? Or was she just trained to be a Goddess like Hercules was trained to be a God-in-training?


6. Equipment - No equipment? Wouldn't her wings be 'equipment' to a degree since theyre able to be summoned? What of any swords? Shields? Battle Armor? Capes?


7. Now, to my understanding if she is a Goddess level in your Powers/Abilties section, and above Zeus, Athena ETC and other gods like Circe which is a demonstrated DC Comic Character Wonder Woman fights against... she would be above them in power? So she has similar strength to God himself? An omnipresent being that creates and controls the universe altogether? Wouldn't this render her all-powerful and incapable of being damaged?
This section is confusing me not just because of that but because below it you enstate that Elaine is also at a half-angel level. I feel both needs to be explained a little more in depth for the reader to understand. There is a conflict in my view seeing as someone who is at a half-angel level cannot be on a goddess level too, seeing as Gods/Goddess are above angels and angels are servants...at least, that's how I view them. Besides, if she's half an angel and goddess abilities... what makes her half an angel? Or are you just referring to her being an angel by the fact she possesses wings and celestial abilities?
In personal viewing I feel like this section as a whole raises more questions that can be answered, and should be revised with more detail. What abilities does she have..exactly? She can create with materials...what materials are they? Does she use materials to heal too or is that just part of her celestial standpoint of being half an archangel?
I ask because one of my characters is a fallen angel with umbrakinetic tendencies and i've had her for at least eight years now...so from my viewpoint as a writer who plays a celestial character things are just a little shakey here in this section.


8. Your weaknesses. Mona, a character your seeking to be played, is stated as her weakness. But Why is Mona a weakness to Elaine? What makes Mona her weakness? Do they have a close bond? Is Mona someone whos able to cancel out her special powers and defeat her every time? Also, I can see how when she has 'yet to fulfill her destiny' can be a weakness. But this raises the question.. what IS her destiny? Why is this a weakness exactly? Is she under a time limit, a sense of urgency to fulfill her destiny? Not only that, but what obstacles would fulfilling her destiny impose to hinder her from such a thing?


9. In your character timeline it says Mona is assassinated, yet in your weaknesses you're seeking someone to play her?
Your character profile on RPhaven and RPC both state she took Yahweh's place, which is God's place by my understanding. Wouldn't that be... overseeing all the angels, and archangels alike such as Lucifer and Michael? This goes back to the conflict I see personally in your Powers/Abilities section. 
Again, i'm unfamiliar with Vertigo comics and what you're trying to percieve so throwing that all aside i'm just looking at Elaine in general with what information you've provided. I ASSUME she was only an angel in heaven before she became a goddess. But when did Yahweh/God disappear? I get that youre trying to leave things vague, and you did a good job...but I feel as if there are some key points left out to tie out loose ends. What led Elaine to erase her mother's memories? What was Elaine's true origin? You get my point, I hope, on how many questions are possible to being asked. This is just what I see.


10. I see a relations bit needing to be placed in this application in order to better understand Elaine's friendships and family.


11. I enjoyed your Audition post. I feel like it showed Elaine's personality well.



 Overall, I feel like your character sounds stronger than she actually is, or is stronger than she truly needs to be. But that's only an opinion.

Again, these are just things I felt need to point out when personally reviewing your application. I'm also new, but seeing as you said you wanted other role players to present feed back I thought I would propose a response to such. I hope you have a marvelous day and time with the DCU community. I look forward to RPing with you, should I be given the opportunity.

[Batman]

Where to begin on a being of creation? The irony is staggering.

1. It has a lot of extremely unspecific things for someone important with abilities of some significance.

If you understood the previous statement or if you didn't understand the previous statement, I'll cut to the chase and explain what I mean. There's a lot of vagueness and unspecific details.

-Age being most important here. It doesn't have to be based on how old she is in the comics, but a range of how old you intend to player her is necessary. If you have an idea and its based on the comics, you have an age range already. (If she's in highschool, she's probably 14-18)

-Faceclaim; pick one. Elaine isn't more than one individual like Firestorm or Billy Batson. So pick one. I'd suggest Melissa Clarke because she looks like Elaine more than Megan Fox.

If I didn't have Slade's knowledge for the background on the character or of the DC Universe, I'd probably be pretty lost. I'd like to see a bit more definition, starting with Gypsy's points would be good place.

2. I like that you have a sense of direction you want to take her and give her. I hope you get a chance to develop that.

3. Your timeline needs some dates. An idea as to when events have happened and what order.

4. The joke is lost to me, why Hedgehogs, but I guess that's for the greater intellects to figure out. (I know this is supposed to be funny, but I have a name to live up to as a killjoy.)

5. Also I wanted to say that regards to fighting Elaine. Physical combat may not be possible, but if you recall Sandman comics, there's more ways to 'fight' than just physical confrontation. Manipulation, for example, is an excellent way to confront and battle someone. Someone deceiving Elaine into hurting herself via her decisions is a powerful technique that all omnipotent entities need be wary of.

I wouldn't limit yourself in such a way. If it happens, deal with it accordingly is my advice.

Overall, it's a fairly well done application. Some tweaks here and there will be good.

[Elaine]

Good afternoon everyone. Thank you for the detailed feedback and for taking the time to read my application, I appreciate it, Gypsy and Batman. I will answer now and try to organize the post as clearly as possible, since there is a lot to answer!

1. The parentheses in the profiles - they're aesthetically distracting. It would sure clear up your profile information to erase the guildelines in parentheses.

That's a good suggestion, I'm have not have the time to reread punctuation guidelines in English recently, but I'm going to assume that they're similar to my own native language and I will use apposition instead of parenthesis.

2. Melissa Clarke > Megan Fox. 'Nuff said. I would personally enjoy seeing Melissa Clarke as your FC.

-Faceclaim; pick one. Elaine isn't more than one individual like Firestorm or Billy Batson. So pick one. I'd suggest Melissa Clarke because she looks like Elaine more than Megan Fox.

Fair enough! I personally don't have a preference but I think that Mellisa Clarke seems to be a favorite of everyone. I do think that she looks very close to Elaine and she does seem to have that "something special" vibe in her looks, doesn't she?

3. It says your character is young... and since she is potentially a celestial creature numbers may not satisfy the descriptive universe. A suggestion would be "Immortal" or "Ageless".. then leave using words such as "Young" to describe her physique and appearance.

-Age being most important here. It doesn't have to be based on how old she is in the comics, but a range of how old you intend to player her is necessary. If you have an idea and its based on the comics, you have an age range already. (If she's in highschool, she's probably 14-18)

Yes, this is all correct. When we first see Elaine in the comics she's twelve years old. She grows in the comics but unfortunately her age is never mentioned again, we do not know her birthday either, only the date of conception is actually known later on, so I could only get an approximate date for her birthday from that. We do see changes in her physical form, especially after she dies and later on becomes a Goddess, however she also chooses to appear the way she likes, either as an immense representation of herself, or in her angel and more normal sized self.

If I have to settle for a range on her current age, after she's made a Goddess which is basically where I start to play her, I'd say that 14-18 is a fair enough range. She is immortal so perhaps I should change that in the application after I finish this post.

4. The eyes... is the Heterochromic? Do they interchange from blue to green, or is half of her iris blue and the other half green ( which is also a form of heterochromia)? I got a little confused. Regardless, each color is beautiful for the eyes!

This is my fault. '=~' means approximately, but I shouldn't have assumed that everyone would understand it in this context, I apologize. I do not know the color of her eyes. Even Mellisa Clarke's eyes seem to vary from blue to green depending on the picture. Perhaps the color teal is a good compromise in this case although I feel that they are more blue than green.

5. Her training - She was given her angelic abilities by Lucifer? Was this when he was still in heaven or after he was casted down from heaven to be the ultimate ruler of hell? Would this make her a fallen angel? or something of that aspect - that is, if she was given abilties after Lucifer was cast from heaven/left heaven. These questions are off of personal intrigue and speculation. I'm not familiar with Vertigo Comic and Elaine's storyline. Also, not only those questions but what training did she recieve from her adventures with Lucifer? Did she learn hand to hand combat? Marksmanship? Spellcasting? Or was she just trained to be a Goddess like Hercules was trained to be a God-in-training?

Ok, I will try to clarify bit by bit.

 1.- She has always been an angel so her angelical abilities, so to say, are inherent to her very self. Her biological father is Lucifer's brother, Michael Demiurgos. The mother was a mortal woman that lived in America, I believe that in New York. Technically this makes Elaine a half-archangel. So no, she's not a fallen angel or made an angel by Lucifer, no no, nothing like that. Lucifer is her biological uncle and Yahweh, god, is her grandfather.

I strongly recommend the Lucifer comics, I deeply love Elaine's story. There are some filler issues and a few things that I do not like all that much, but overall they're fantastic and have many funny moments too.

2.- About the training. No, Elaine isn't a physical fighter and she wouldn't know how to use a pistol. Her adventures more often than not had to do with social or intelligence related skills. In the comics she was only trained in creation after she created her own creation with the demiurgic power, it is one of the most entertaining moments of the comics and I recommend it.

Before that she was given the task to ask every immortal in Lucifer's realm to leave. However this task is no longer possible for my Elaine because our Lucifer never created his realm. I'd imagine that after being made a Goddess she has experimented with or without help, in the comics it is not shown, but it's a fair assumption because she seems to be an amazingly skilled Goddess as she solves a few issues with other immortals.

6. Equipment - No equipment? Wouldn't her wings be 'equipment' to a degree since theyre able to be summoned? What of any swords? Shields? Battle Armor? Capes?

I wouldn't call her wings equipment because they're part of her very self. She can summon them at will or make herself appear without them. As for swords, caps, shields, battle armor. She can create anything that she wants as a Goddess, except for a creation with a big bang since she doesn't have the demiurgic power yet, but she has never used any of those weapons or armor in the comics. Think of her more as a diplomat rather than a combat oriented character.

Now, to my understanding if she is a Goddess level in your Powers/Abilties section, and above Zeus, Athena ETC and other gods like Circe which is a demonstrated DC Comic Character Wonder Woman fights against... she would be above them in power? So she has similar strength to God himself? An omnipresent being that creates and controls the universe altogether? Wouldn't this render her all-powerful and incapable of being damaged?

This section is confusing me not just because of that but because below it you enstate that Elaine is also at a half-angel level. I feel both needs to be explained a little more in depth for the reader to understand. There is a conflict in my view seeing as someone who is at a half-angel level cannot be on a goddess level too, seeing as Gods/Goddess are above angels and angels are servants...at least, that's how I view them. Besides, if she's half an angel and goddess abilities... what makes her half an angel? Or are you just referring to her being an angel by the fact she possesses wings and celestial abilities?

In personal viewing I feel like this section as a whole raises more questions that can be answered, and should be revised with more detail. What abilities does she have..exactly? She can create with materials...what materials are they? Does she use materials to heal too or is that just part of her celestial standpoint of being half an archangel?

I ask because one of my characters is a fallen angel with umbrakinetic tendencies and i've had her for at least eight years now...so from my viewpoint as a writer who plays a celestial character things are just a little shakey here in this section.

She's above pagan gods, this is correct, she's more powerful than them. But for example, Circe, even if technically she is not a Goddess and was made one by Hecate, she is still dangerous to Elaine, not because of Circe's power but because she is Circe and may be able to misdirect or manipulate Elaine. Elaine has been manipulated a few times in the comics, Fenris for example did it with ease after Elaine was temporarily blinded.

Elaine is both a half-angel and a Goddess at the same time. Overall in term of power it goes likes this:

1. Yahweh, God, her grandfather is at the very top.
2. Then there is Elaine's father and uncle, Michael and Lucifer respectively.
3. Then Raguel, the Spectre, he's like another uncle for Elaine, just not biologically.
4. Elaine and pretty much every other angel.
5. Pagan gods, others beings and immortals.

Elaine is more powerful than the pagan gods, but just so you imagine it properly: The pagan gods are ants when compared to Lucifer or Michael, those two are THAT powerful.

Her destiny is to become THE goddess of creation and when she does she would be at the very top with demiurgic power, at number 1. In the comics, her grandfather rules from the top. She however eventually understands that she has to merge with her creation or else she would bend her own rules in order to help those that she loves.

But yes, even at her current stage, number 4, I discourage PvP because she's immensely powerful. But like Batman says down below, while physical combats are a very obvious bad idea, other types, such as misdirection, manipulation, etc... may bring very interesting and enjoyable games. Again, she's a half-archangel because her father is the archangel Michael Demiurgos and her mother was a human woman, therefore half-archangel or half-angel for short

As for her current creation powers. The thing is that she can shape and create anything if she had the material for it, like her uncle does, in other words, if what she wants to create exists or is possible in Yahweh's creation, then Elaine can create it too, technically she can create everything so the limitation is that she cannot create her own creation/multiverse unless she has demiurgic power, which she still doesn't.

As for healing, think of it like magical healing. The difference between creation and magic powers here is that whatever that is affected with creation powers will stay even when Elaine isn't present. Magic on other hand will eventually vanish is the user doesn't concentrate on it or if the magic user is gone.

If you have more questions please let me know and I will be happy to try to answer them!

8. Your weaknesses. Mona, a character your seeking to be played, is stated as her weakness. But Why is Mona a weakness to Elaine? What makes Mona her weakness? Do they have a close bond? Is Mona someone whos able to cancel out her special powers and defeat her every time? Also, I can see how when she has 'yet to fulfill her destiny' can be a weakness. But this raises the question.. what IS her destiny? Why is this a weakness exactly? Is she under a time limit, a sense of urgency to fulfill her destiny? Not only that, but what obstacles would fulfilling her destiny impose to hinder her from such a thing?

Yes they do. Mona is her best friend forever, that's why Mona is a weakness to Elaine and Elaine a weakness to Mona in the way that, for example, a loved one is a weakness to a superhero. Elaine's destiny, like I explained before, is to become the new Goddess of creation. In the comics there is a great sense or urgency in several parts of the story. But due to the changes that we have made for my Elaine to integrate her with our Lucifer, we're already taking a slightly different path from the comics, which is what I wanted too. I do not know if we will eventually have a similar sense of urgency, but I think that it would be very exciting if they have to work against the clock and succeed.

9. In your character timeline it says Mona is assassinated, yet in your weaknesses you're seeking someone to play her?

Your character profile on RPhaven and RPC both state she took Yahweh's place, which is God's place by my understanding. Wouldn't that be... overseeing all the angels, and archangels alike such as Lucifer and Michael? This goes back to the conflict I see personally in your Powers/Abilities section.

Again, i'm unfamiliar with Vertigo comics and what you're trying to percieve so throwing that all aside i'm just looking at Elaine in general with what information you've provided. I ASSUME she was only an angel in heaven before she became a goddess. But when did Yahweh/God disappear? I get that youre trying to leave things vague, and you did a good job...but I feel as if there are some key points left out to tie out loose ends. What led Elaine to erase her mother's memories? What was Elaine's true origin? You get my point, I hope, on how many questions are possible to being asked. This is just what I see.

3. Your timeline needs some dates. An idea as to when events have happened and what order.

Yes she's assassinated the first time that they appear in the comics. However Mona becomes a ghost after being murdered and Elaine can see ghosts and interact with them. After Elaine took her grandfather's place she removed heaven and hell from her creation. After she was done she had an amazing scene which I won't spoil in case that you decide to read the comics, and then she merged with her creation, becoming omniscient too. So yes, technically she oversees everyone and everything at the same time at that point.

Elaine never lived in heaven, she visited it in her adventures but up to the point where her adventures started, Elaine lived with her "adoptive" parents, if you read the comics you will understand why I used quotes there!

Much of the series is about Yahweh vacating its own creation and Lucifer subtly guiding Elaine to be her grandfather's replacement, although it's debatable if Lucifer had it planned or if the events actually made him improvise towards that end. It's fairly hilarious though, specially for Lucifer, because if that was the case, it would mean that everything was part of the plan of Yahweh. Like I said they're very well written comics.

Elaine removed her mother's memories so that she could live a happy life. One of the things that I have left vague on purpose, and I told Slade about this specifically, is the Bellocs, her "adoptive" family. I have no tolerance towards domestic abuse and violence, it irks me on a very personal level. Elaine's "adoptive" father slapped Elaine, which is also one of the reasons for me wanting to claim "Elaine" without the "Belloc" as an username on RPC. I'm not saying that it did not happen, I'm simply leaving it vague and ignored on purpose.

As for the dates in the timeline. The timeline is organized from past to present. So the first line was the first thing that happened and the last is the last thing that happened to Elaine and it is also where I start playing her. I could place some dates, but I cannot even estimate them, they would be just the dates that I feel like giving because there is no information in the comics. I might need help to avoid conflicts with other timelines but I feel that leaving the timeline as is now shouldn't be too much of an issue. Let me know anyway.

10. I see a relations bit needing to be placed in this application in order to better understand Elaine's friendships and family.

4. The joke is lost to me, why Hedgehogs, but I guess that's for the greater intellects to figure out. (I know this is supposed to be funny, but I have a name to live up to as a killjoy.)

I thought about this myself too. I will do it now very briefly.

Lucifer Morningstar -> Elaine's uncle. He cares for Elaine is his own way, not with words or promises, but with acts, by saving her for example and she realizes this, which places him very high in her book.

Michael Demiurgos -> Elaine's father. This is one of the things that we have changed. Michael expressed regret about not coming to Elaine three times during the comics. So I just made it happen in my audition post. I have failed so far to find anyone interested in playing him so, I will probably NPC him whenever needed or wanted.

Yahweh -> Elaine's grandfather. He's a bit of a dick to everyone, excuse the language. He exiled Michael because Yahweh didn't want Michael to interfere at some point in the stories, Michael did because otherwise Elaine would have died, this means that Yahweh would have sacrificed his own and only granddaughter in order to see Lucifer fail and be gone forever. Their relationship improves somewhat after that, at least he asks about how Elaine is doing as the new Goddess of creation.

Mona -> Best friend forever with Elaine. She became the guardian, or Goddess, of hedgehogs. Why hedgehogs? Well she didn't know what did she want to be a guardian of, she even mentioned chocolate before finally going for hedgehogs! *giggles* Elaine adores her.

Mazikeen -> Lucifer's... lover, sort of. They have a complicated relationship. She was eventually ordered to be at the service of Elaine during the task that Lucifer gave to Elaine. Elaine and Mazikeen became a bit closer during that adventure.

Raguel-The Spectre -> He's basically another uncle for Elaine. He's the angel of... many things, including justice and even though they don't interact in the comics, I'm very excited about playing with the player of the Spectre.

Death of the Endless -> They met briefly when Elaine died after she gave her lifeforce to her uncle, resurrecting him. I'd love to interact more with Death although in order less deadly circumstances and hopefully see them hug again like in the comics.

Destiny of the Endless -> No one plays this fellow, but they met when he organize a dinner for Elaine, Michael, Lucifer and himself and Elaine proved to be the most mature of them all. I'd love to interact with him again or at least have another fun dinner at some point.

Duma -> The angel of silence, he doesn't speak with words but he's able to communicate and he befriended and saved Elaine in one occasion. He's a very good angel, unlike other more violent ones, and Elaine is glad that she's his friend.

Did I miss anyone important? I think not but let me know anyway.

I think that I answered everything, but again, let me know if I missed something. And of course I will be happy to get to know you all if you also give me the chance.

[Deleted]

I honestly would like to see a lot, if not everything, that you explained in this most recent response post within your application. Every bit of this information cleared things up for me supremely and gave me a better understanding of your character while your profile still remains very vague despite recent edits.

That's just my opinion. I ain't got a say, just a suggestion.

[Elaine]

I'm sorry but I wouldn't even know where to start to integrate all that I wrote into the application and still maintain its structure intact. It would take way too much time that I, unfortunately, do not have. However, it is also redundant too, because I already posted said information in my first reply, so it is there for everyone to read too!

Edit: I have edited the application now that I have the time, it should be easier for those that do not know the character, any questions are welcome.

[Lucifer Morningstar]

Figured I should actually respond to this one. seeing as I already approve of Elaine and all.

First of Elaine is no older than 15. She would have been around 12 When Lucifer first met her.

Mona was kidnapped and then Murdered. Elaine would have been next if not for Lucifer's intervention.

Also Elaine wasn't conceived like a normal child. Part of Michael's power was stolen by another angel. 2 half breeds were created from this Elaine and her older half brother who was brain washed and killed by Lucifer The Belloc Woman is actually Elaine's Biological mother Michael's power got infused in her. She assumed it was her husbands child.

As I have stated before Elaine being abused by her father is what actually made her a stronger person alot like Batman's parents being murdered. Lucifer later replaced her abusive father with a demon as a side note.

Elaine does not actually have the Morningstar power, that Lucifer has. She can create what is already available but cannot create stars from matter created by the big bang. If she had splintered wood she could create a chair. Things like that.
The Hedgehog joke Bruce actually comes from Lucifer's world. He forbid worship of any kind. But when he saved Mona and Elaine from The mansions of Silence. the place where Angels go after death and a place he was not allowed to go because it would shatter upon entry. They were both dead. He restored them to life. Elaine and Mona decided that they would rather stay within his world. Lucifer told them they could , and they asked to be guardians =, Lucifer said they could not be worshiped and no one could know they existed Mona stated that she would like the be the goddess over hedgehogs...and Lucifer said that was the stupidest thing he had ever heard..and gave her the power over Hedgehogs to protect them. He gave the power to protect everything else to Elaine. and Turned them into Goddesses. With this power. Elaine was able to rid the creation of Immortals, Demons, And Pagan Gods who had sought shelter there after Yahweh left creation. Yahweh being God and having left all of creation forced the Spectre to go search for him. He had actually left creation Some time ago. To see how it played out without him.

[Batman]

Approved with a dash of history lesson put in here.

Side comment, I agree with Slade regarding her abusive father. I understand it may hit close to home, but perhaps that's why you like Elaine; she has overcome that burden and sees it as wrong. It drives her (much like it drives you) to oppose that kind of behavior and teach others that its not a solution.

Clint Eastwood explained it best (though he was talking about War)

"The best Anti-war films are ones that show you the affects war has on the families of the soldiers."

In this case, its abuse.

Food for thought.

[Dean]

Approved